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    In every family there's usually one kid that stands out; one that has exceptional talent, dashing good looks and irresistible charm. Not so in this family. Most would agree that of the five boys born to Adrian Breeding not one of them stands out. ... more
Jul 17, 2008 at 12:20 pm[[missi interprize]] -A Females Intution- Chapter 3

ok when i saw all the comments i smiled HELLA BIG!Lol. thank ya'll -hahaha

another thing, umm theres gonna be a lil twist in this story and its pretty obvious, but i still need 1 more female.
here's the cast so far...

[[WIFEY's]]
Kelly: Angel
Patrick: Krys
Carnell: Mishaun
Bryan: Jamie

[[The BOO's on the side]]
Kelly: Qween
Patrick: ??
Carnell: Kar
Bryan: Miah


i need a Boo for Pat, ya'll we all know he's good-looking so sign up!!Lol.

Chapter 3
[[Mishaun pov]]

i been here talking to Krys for about 30 minutes, just listening to the conversation change by her changing emotions. she is pregnant, and i'll put money on that.

Krys: Missi, you wanna just go to the mall...(gco)

we see Angel, and Jamie walk past the window, outside. when the hell did they get here??
then Patrick, Carnell, Bryan and Kelly walk in the den with us

Mishaun: what are you guys doing in here??

Patrick: this is my house, i can be in here

Mishaun sticks her tonge out at him. if i wasn't hella koo and close with her, and if i didn't trust my man, i would definently think there was something between them two. but from my point of view of trust, their just like brother and sister.

me: so what babe, out of all the rooms, you guys invade ours

Patrick: so...(gco)

he gets cut off by Carnell's phone ringing. Carnell looks at the number on the screen and then walks outside and answers it. i turn to Mishaun

me: lets go in the other room and talk, where we can have some privacy...(evil eyes at patrick)

Pat:(smiles) yeah leave, krys

me: what ever

i grab Mishaun's hand and lead her into the wreck room downstairs. we plop on the couch.
she has this worried look on her face, as if shes in heavy thought, or shes hurting inside

me: whats wrong with you??

Mishaun: i'll tell you if you keep your big mouth shut with this one

me: ok (smiles) i will

Mishaun: im serious Krys, not even Pat

dang, this has got to be good if i have to keep it from my man. but im here for her so i promise

me: i promise...

Mishaun: ok, earlier today at home, i was...
........
OUTSIDE WITH JAMIE && ANGEL
[[nobody's pov]]

Jamie and Angel are sitting on an Oakwood bench in the middle of Krystins lovely garden

Jamie: so are you gonna tell me whats bothering you??

Angel: yeah...i guess...i just dont know where to begin

Jamie: is it Kelly??

Angel:(soft) yeah...last week i came home early from my weekly work out at the gym, right

Jamie knods

Angel: and i guess Kelly didn't know i was home, because i heard some girls voice and then his in the house, while i was getting out of my shower....

Jamie: and thats it??

Angel shakes her head from left to right
[[Angel pov]]

Jamie: girl if you dont spit it out, i'll just ask Kelly.....

this girl is mad crazy, but she's hella nice. i feel like i wanna tell her the rest of the story, but i cant find the words to explain it, i dont know if i can trust her yet....
but i take the risk and tell her, i end off by saying...

me: i was soo hurt when i walked down stairs and saw them taking off their clothes to get it on

Jamie's mouth is wide open

Jamie: i cant believe he would do that!

me:(worried, looking around) Jamie!, dont shout my business out, ppl might hear your loud self

Jamie: but Kelly seems too nice and laid back to be cheating

me: he didn't cheat on me, he was about to and he got his dumb-a** busted

Jamie: what did you do to them?? what happened??

ok now, she just sounds a little too intrested in my business...but if it were the other way around, and i was her, i'd be doing the samething shes doing right now

me: i marched my half n***d self in the room and all hell broke loose, thats what happened

Jamie: wow, did you reconize the girl??

me: naw she grabbed her clothes and booked, i was too worried about getting kelly

Jamie: you actually hit him??

i knod: yawp, did you see his bottom lip??

she laughs and knods

Jamie: he said you opened the door on his face

i laugh, kelly is soo silly. i dont wanna leave him and i dont think i could

Jamie: did you leave??

me: naw, you know what?? he begged me to stay

Jamie: ah, man if that was Bryan, i wouldv'e killed him

our conversation gets killed off when Carnell comes up behind us, ahh hell, did he hear us??

me: Carnell...how much did you hear??

Carnell: just enough to know that Jamie would kill my little brother

me and Jamie laugh

Carnell: you guys are weird

and he walks off talking on his phone. Mishaun and Krys walk down the balconys twining steps to our little area, and they join our chatting group

[[Mishaun pov]]

Krys: hey guys

Jamie: hey you two, where were ya'll??

Krys: downstairs, trying to find some privacy from those nosey boys

Angel:(smiles) that wack a** Patrick said ya'll were at the mall

i kinda exclude myself from their conversation, and i watch Carnell half way across the field, talking on his phone with that same smile on his face
"who the heck is he talking to??" i go through every girl in my mind, who i would consider a "behind the scenes" type of girl, but nobody pops in my head...and now i feel like im being cheated on with ghost

me: ima be right back

i get up and cautiously walk torwards Carnell. he looks at me like i violated something, but i dont care, i want some answers
as i get closer, he lowers his voice, and as i step in front of him, i can hear a girls voice on the other end of the line. he rushes her off the phone

Carnell: i'll call you back (hangs up) whats up, babe??

me: Carnell, we need to talk...

when he looks at me, its like hes examining me, i get a weird feeling inside my chest
his eyes lower down to my stomack, and he places his hands there, he opens his mouth, but i hurry and cut him off

me: Carnell get off me, i am not pregnant

he removes his hands and smiles, i smile a little too, but then i make a straight face and ask him my origoinal question

me: who were you talking to??

Carnell: i was talking to Kar

me: whose she??

Carnell: the receptionist at BK and Bad Boy Interprize...

me: really??

he knods: who else would i be talking to??

i shrug: i dont know, another female...

Carnell: baybee, please do not start with me

me:(a little attitude) i didn' plan on it

Carnell:(coping my attitude) ok, good

i smile and fold my arms, he is not getting off that easy with me, like i said in chapter 1, i am not the average

me: so..you and your brothers are gonna take a shot at a music career??

Carnell knows his lying a** should stop while hes ahead, but his ego is way too high for his own taste

Carnell:(grabs my hand) lets go talk in the guest room

annoyed, i follow him. he sits me on the bed and stands in front of me. i look up into his eyes, he closes the door, and then takes his place in front of me again

Carnell: babe, i know where you're going with this...and you're wrong. i wouldn't do that to you, ok??

i look at him. hes got me trapped in this room, and hes trying to take advantage of me

me: i dont know Carnell...

Carnell: what the hell do you mean?? you dont know??

me: exactly what i said, im not sure if thats it

Carnell: why the hell not?? you think im a liar or something??

me: no i dont, its the smile that was on your face, is the smile you give me ,when we're together

Carnell: wow that sounds dumb! that.....

WITH THE BOY's

Bryan: Kelly, cut the bull c**p, what really happened to your lip??

Patrick: yeah are you slippin??

Kelly: naw, mane, my baybee caught me...the day i finally brought Qweem to the crib

Patrick and Bryan laugh like its the funniest thing in the world

Kelly: laugh all you want, just know i handled it like a pimp

Patrick: what do you mean??

Bryan: yeah, you mean you hit Angel?? because she got you good man

Pat and Bryan laugh again, then they give eachother dapp.

Kelly:(annoyed) shut the hell up, and maybe i'll tell ya'll

they listen as he continues

Kelly: Carnell should be hearing this right now....

Bryan: just get on with it, i gotta go soon

Kelly: alright, she walked in and Qween broke, so Angel started yelling and hitting me, then i pinned her aginst the wall and made up some lame a** lie and she believed me, then we ended up having s*x

Patrick: what did you say to her??

as Kelly opens his moutht to speak, Patrick and Bryan are looking at him like hes God or something

Kelly: i said "baby, i love you, and you know that" then i said "i missed you too bad and just thinking about you made me horny, so i was confused"

Bryan: wow, you got that s**t from Dustin

they all laugh, then Patrick stops and looks out the window.

Patrick: is it me, or do ya'll hear that??

they can hear Carnell and Mishaun arguing downstairs. they start laughing and then they listen in

WITH THE GIRLS
[[Krys' pov]]

i just got done telling Krys the story of Kelly attempting to cheat on me

Krys: wow ya'll are deep, ima go check on Mishaun, i'll be right back

i get up and leave them in the courtyard to talk. i hear weird noises coming from the room downstairs, i cant figure out whats going on...so i knock

me: are ya'll ok in there??

Carnell: yeah we're fine, she'll be out in a minute

me: ok

i dont know if they were mad at eachother, or doing the nasty, because i never heard noises like that before.
i slowly walk to the middle level of the house, torwards the den. im about to knock on the door, but then i hear Patrick talking about me and my whole 'pregnant' situation...


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ok i hope ya'll liked chapter 3 if you did, you know what to do, and if you didn't, then let me know wa**up, in a comment, and dont forget the slot OPEN for PATRICK's BOO

and other ladies who signed up, Sorry if you didn't get the you might have wanted, but i tried with the whole 'BOO' thang. leave your opinion

-mishaun

 
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Jul 18, 2008 at 7:04 am 

BUMPZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ TO THE FULLEST LOVE THE STORY GIRL KEEP IT MOVEIN!!LOL

 
Jul 17, 2008 at 11:29 pm 

OMG GIRL I LUV THIS STORIE!!! IT JUST FEELZ SO REAL!!! AND J LIL VIOLENT A** TRYNA KILL SOMEBODY LMAO...ANGEL IM HELLA SORRY FOR CAUSIN UR RELATIONSHIP SUCH HARM...FORGIVE ME? LOLBUT GIRL THIS IS HELLA GREAT AND I LUVED IT...WELL I LUV ALL OF EM SO IT DOESNT MATTER...AND THANKX 4 PUTTIN ME IN YA STORY MAMI....

*yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Mz. Rasberry

 
Jul 17, 2008 at 8:49 pm 

Gurl this was bangin.I cant wait 4 da next chapter.

~~Krys~~

 
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