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    B5

    In every family there's usually one kid that stands out; one that has exceptional talent, dashing good looks and irresistible charm. Not so in this family. Most would agree that of the five boys born to Adrian Breeding not one of them stands out. ... more
Jul 18, 2008 at 12:00 amCHAPTER 1 OF JUST CAN'T LET HIM GO!!!:) PLZ READ

***CAST***
-Dizz-Lashawn
-Patty Cakes-Kara
-Kellz-CeCe
-Nellz-Bre
-BryBry-Me
-Myles-Qween
-BK-Kar
-Bow Wow-Angel
-Cel-Danni


!!!W/ KAR!!!
(Kar was in the kitchen waiting for BK to come home from work, but it was past 12 && she was worried cuz he wasnt answering his fone)
-Kar-(to herself)ugh! where the fruck is he.
(She tries calling his cell again but it goes straight to voicemail)
*About an hour later*
-BK-(walks in && sees kar)what the hell are yu doing up so late?
-Kar-(kinda mad)i should be asking yu that question
-Bk-whatever, I told yu i was going to working late
-Kar-no Bk, you didnt,to think of it, you dont tell me anything anymore
-Bk-woman yu need sleep, I tell you everything you need to know
-Kar-(fake laugh)ha! everything i need to know? righhtt..so you think you can hide all these d**n females numbers from me(throwing all the pieces of paper on the ground)you aint that slick sweetie
-Bk-(suprisingly calm)how'd you find those, the only place i had those was
-Kar-in your drawer, am i right?
-Bk-(was squeezing his hands real tight)
-Kar-what yu aint gone try and change the storii around, yu kno be slick wit it nd think im friggin stupid
(Bk started breathing real hard and Kar could smell the alcohol under his breathe)
-Kar-have you been drinking
-Bk-I aint got to tell you anything, I am not a child and i do whatever the f**k i feel like doing
-Kar-(yelling)wth is the matter with you! Why the hell did you marry me if yu didnt want to commit..did yu forget what yu said I Do too?
(Bk picks up a frying pan and puts it on the stove)
-Kar-what, yu not gonna ask me to make nuffin for you,(being sarcastic)remember I was yur lil slave who cooked for you, cleaned for you-(gco)
-Bk-(yelling violently)kar will you just shut the f**k up!!!!
-Kar-(yelling back)NO Brandon, I WON'-
(All the anger had finally boiled over in Bk that he thru the semi hot pan straight at Kar's face)
-Bk-(runs toward her)oh d**n, I'm sorry baby, I didnt mean too, really I just got mad and yu know this is the first time in months that ive done something as stupid as this, which means
-Kar-(getting up & kinda scared/studderin)that yur getting better?? i-it's not ok,Imma go(she runs upstairs into the bathroom and slams the door)
*Bk's Thoughts*
what the hell did I just do. God whats wrong with me!!!

THE NEXT DAY AROUND 8:00

BACK @ THE HOUSE W/ QWEEN, KARA && ME
(Qween was sitting on the couch with Myles watching the soap opera Passions)
-Qween-(tearing up)awwww thats so cute
-Myles-(rolling his eyes)wow, do we have to watch this
-Qween-this show is amazing, I dont kno why yu dont like it
-Myles-cuz its one of those shows yu watch with your girlfriends, not yur man
-Qween-(her lil evil laugh)well, i guess imma have to change that rule
-Myles-(fake smile)great
*The Phone rings
-Qween-(answering the phone)hullerr
-M/v-hey is Kara there?
-Qween-yess she isss, may i ask who is speaking
-M/V-Its Patrick
-Qween-well hold on real quick sweetness (yelling) KARA SOME BODY DA PHONE FOR YOU!!!
-Kara-(running downstairs)who?
-Qween-(handing her the phone)I dont kno some dude named patrick
-Kara-patrick?..oh ok(she runs back upstairs and takes a few deep breathes before saying hello)hullo?
-Pat-hey Kara, how's it been
-Kara-(kinda confused)umm fine
-Pat-I kno its kinda stupid calling you now
-Kara-yea its been years since i was in the 7th grade, nd now I'm about to start 12th.
-Pat-(sighs)yea, well I was going thru some of my stuff from middle school nd i found yur number, and I cant believe i almost forgot we were like best friends
-Kara-yea
-Pat-well if its ok I wanna start hanging out again..well its up to you
-Kara-umm-(gco)
-Me-Kara, its time to go, Myles taking us out to dinner
-Kara-havent yu heard of knocking!?
-Me-(i knock on the door twice)happy? now come on!
-Kara-Pat, I'll call yu back later, it that ok?
-Pat-yea its cool

W/ Bre && Lashawn
-Lashawn-(flopping down on the couch)Man this house became boring since Kar got married and moved out
-Bre-yea, but thats cuz yu aint got a man
-Lashawn-whatever
-Bre-luckily for you, I'm bringing over company
-Lashawn-(sitting up)what type of company?
-Bre-Carnell && his older brother Dustin
-Lashawn-should i be afraid to ask why he's bringing over dustin?
-Bre-oh plz yu kno yu like him
-Lashawn-no i dont, i said he was cute && thats it
-Bre-cute can transform into many things
(The doorbell rings)
-Bre-(laughing && getting up)I'll get it
(Bre opens the door nd in comes Nellz and Dizz)
-Carnell-hey babe(giving her a kiss)
-Bre-man, its been a lont time (giving him a hug)
-Dizz-its been 3 days
-Bre-like i said a long time
(Bre was giving dizz signals to go talk to Lashawn)
-Dizz-(mouthing)now
-Lashawn-if yu trying to fix suttin up Bre(getting up) I'm not interested
(Lashawn walks out the door and drives off somewhere)
-Carnell-d**n, that chick be scarin the c**p out of me sometimes

W/ ANGEL && BOW WOW
-Bow Wow-who you texting
-Angel-(eyes glues to her phone)Qween, I'm asking her if she wanna go to the mall tomorrow
-Bow Wow-(rolling his eyes)so yu leaving me again
-Angel-(putting her fone back in her pocket && goes over to give him a hug)awww is my teddy bear feeling neglected
-Bow Wow-(laughing)dont make me laugh, I'm mad at you
-Angel-(giving him a kiss on the cheek)its impossible for yu to be mad at me
-Bow Wow-(starts tickling her but then gets up when he hears his cellphone rign from upstairs)be right back babe
-Angel-iight(gets up to turn on the t.v)
*Upstairs*
-Bow Wow-hullo
-Kelly-hey man, whats been up with you
-Bow Wow-kelly?!
-Kelly-yea, what yu doing tomorrow
-Bow Wow-i was just gonna chill at home with angel but she going to the mall with qween
-Kelly-oh perfect then, you can come wit Cece && me, we just gonna hang out
-Bow Wow-(laughing)so yu finally copped a girl
-Kelly-shut up, well i got to go so I'll see yu tomorrow bak at my house
-Bow Wow-iight man, see yu tomorrow

W/ MARCEL && DANNI
(Danni was laying on her bed watching a movie when Cel comes in)
-Marcel-(jumping on the bed beside her)hey baby what ya watching
-Danni-idk some movie I found
-Marcel-so you wanna go out tonite or are yu gonna just stay here and watch this movie yu aint even kno the name of
-Danni-(zoned into the movie)
-Marcel-are yu even listenin to me?
-Danni-ssh
-Marcel-if yu not gonna pay attention to me, then i guess imma have to make yu
(Cel starts tickling and poking her everywhere && she was liking it until she felt this weird feeling)
-Danni-stop stop
-Cel-why whats wrong
-Danni-I(getting up and runs into the bathroom && starts to barf && cough)
-Cel-(follows her)oh s**t, Danni, yu coughing up blood, get up lemme take yu to the hospital
-Danni-(getting up)Marcel, I'm fine, It's probably cuz i need some fresh air, I'm going outside
-Cel-Lemme come with you
-Danni-no, I'm fine
(She grabs her cell&&rushes out the door)
-M/V-hullo
-Danni-chris we need to talk
-Chris-Danni, is that you
-Danni-yea
-Chris-ok whats wrong

W/ CeCe && Kelly
-Kelly-hey babe you got any plans tomorrow
-CeCe-(kinda absorbed in her book)um no not really
-Kelly-ok well Imma introduce yu to one of my friends, what are yu reading
-CeCe-(putting the book down)nothing, && sure that sounds like fun
-Kelly-ok well imma go out and pick up something for dinner(giving her a kiss on the cheek)
-CeCe-ok
-Kelly-want anything special
-CeCe-no not really
(Kelly walks out the door && cant help but think that CeCe hiding something from him)
*CeCe's thoughts*
D**n dis sucks, Kelly alredy suspecting suttin. But i cant tell him yet, He too happy about this new job nd s**t nd now he gets to actually have a chance to hang out with a buddy. I probly shouldnt even go thru with this....

*W/ Kara
(Kara couldnt sleep && she thought it would be too late to even call pat)
-Kara-(hesitates but cant help but dial his number)
-Pat-(still half asleep)hello?
-Kara-(whisperin)hey pat,can yu talk
-Pat-kara? man yu calling late
-Kara-(laughing)yea i kno, but I was thnkin maybe we can hang out tomorrow, yu know catch up
-Pat-sounds great
-Kara-well imma let yu go back to sleep ok
-Pat-iight, nitenite

*W/ Kar Outside
*thinking to herself
I cant tell Danni cuz she probly kill Brandon. I know he was wrong for doing this but I cant keep it down anymore, its not the first time he's hurt me..it just keeps getting worse!..Carnell, he's quiet nd ive known him since middle school
(She decides to call Carnell)
-Carnell-(sleepily)hello?
-Kar-hey nellz, its Kar i need to talk
-Carnell-(looking at his clock which read 1:35)why yu calling so late
-Kar-i dont kno its Brandon
-Carnell-what happened, he ok
-Kar-yea he's fine
-Carnell-are you ok
-Kar-(doesnt answer)
-Carnell-I'll be there in a few




BUMPZZZ TO FIND OUT MORE!!!:)
SORRY IM KINDA TIRED HOP YU GUYS LIKED IT!!!
MZ CHOCO CHIP PRODUCTION



 
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Jul 19, 2008 at 8:31 pm 

Awwwwwwwwww J dat was bangin. Keep it comin ma.

*Nea

Mz. Watermelon

 
Jul 19, 2008 at 4:07 am 

Uh Oh I wonDer Wat Bout 2 Go DowN!!
BHuMpz It Upz Girl!!!

 
Jul 18, 2008 at 8:37 pm 

bumpz to the fullest sis

CeCe

 
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