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    In every family there's usually one kid that stands out; one that has exceptional talent, dashing good looks and irresistible charm. Not so in this family. Most would agree that of the five boys born to Adrian Breeding not one of them stands out. ... more
Jul 18, 2008 at 2:10 pm-A Females Intution- Chapter 4

ok i got all the Wifey's and Boo's for the ppl in my story, its gonna

xBeTheBawmb;TickTicKx Lol.

umm well i would put the cast down but i dont wanna loose this idea in my head for Chapter 4 so ima write it down later on

Chapter 4
.::LATER THAT NIGHT::.
[[Mishaun pov]]
when we got home and i saw the damage Carnell done to me, i flipped out! i charged him and we were straight boxing. i cant believe he actually put his hands on me, i wanna kill this man
right now, im changing from my clothes into my pajamas. Carnell's down the hall on his phone again. when hes sleep i swear ima break it
when i hear him walking down torwards our room, i rush with my clothes..

[[Nellz pov]]

i walk in the room and see her bending over on the bed with out any pants on. i wanna lay her down and forget about today. but she aint just gonna let it blow over like that. shes different, and i guess thats why im with her. but today, she acted a srtaight a**, so i had to put her in check, but maybe she'll see things from my perspective...
i walk over to her and grab her from behind. she stands up straight and then sighs

Missi: Nelly, get off of me

me: no, why?? i want you

Missi: i dont care, i dont want you near me

me: why you trippin so hard?? d**n, ma, you need to calm down

Missi: dont tell me what i should be doing, you need to focus on yourself first

me: man, shut up, you dont even know what you're talking about. all im trying to do is apologize to your a**

Missi:(mad as hell) you think you can just make things better by s*x??

[[end pov]]

Carnell:(emotion-less) man i dont care about what you say anymore, ima get what i want, one way or another

Mishaun: and what the hell does that mean??

she gets out of his arms and turns to face him. thats when he pushes her on the bed. before she could even think, he has her pinned down by the arms and he forcing her to the middle of the bed

Mishaun:(scared) Carnell, get off of me!!

Nelly:(calm) dont make things difficult, if you knew something, you would let this all be over with

as he starts kissing on her, shes struggling with all her strenth, but it doesn't seem to phase him. he rips her tanktop off, then he pops her bra off, she has tears in her eyes, and shes scared. Carnell proceeds to go on with the violation.........

MEAN WHILE WITH Angel && Kelly
[[Angels pov]]

ever since that day last week, things between me and my baybee been kinda akward. i mean we still act like we normally do, but i dont feel right. like how do i honestly know that he hasn't cheated before?? i mean i only caught him once, he couldv'e done it before..
i cant stand how paranoid hes made me, but im in love with this boy

me: babe, are you asleep??

Kelly: im almost there why??

he repositions his arm around me and then he kisses the back of my neck. i wish he wouldn't. and for some reason, i feel like i been doing something sneaky, like im the one to blame...maybe i am, maybe he tried to cheat because im not giving him exactly what he wants. we need some MAJOR communication in our relationship

me: Kelly, please just be honest...have you cheated before??

Kelly: naw, i haven't

i exhale and try to get comfortable again. i find the rythm of his heartbeat, and before i know it, i've drifted off to sleep. i dream and dream about what un-nessary drama tomorrows gonna bring

[[Kelly Kellz pov]]

d**n i lied through my teeth. i was actually with Qween, before i even met Angel, so does that mean Qweens my boo?? i mean i tried the whole 'commitment' thing with Qween, but then i got cheated on. so i went out to Club Velocity, and met my baybay
i dont like lying to her, because she has soo much trust in me, and thats why i be walking around with a little guilt on my shoulders
i close my eyes, reach over and turn the light off, then i lean over and kiss her lips, then i attempt to go to sleep, but i cant. i call Qween. i dont just call her so we can get down every now and then, i also call her because shes good to talk to, and i open up to her...(gco)

Qween:(yawning) hello??

me: wa**up girl??

Qween: do you know what time it is??, Kelly it is almost three in the morning

me: and?? you dont wanna talk?? i need to talk to you

Qween:(another yawn) ok im here for you, preach

me: aight, i feel bad

Qween: about what??

me: Angel asked if i ever slept with you, and i said no

Qween: aww you know what that means right??

me: no i dont, thats why i called you

Qween:(sarcastic) im honored, to be woken up to talk about your...(gco)

me: get to the point, mama. what does it mean??

Qween: it means you love her, silly

me: no it doesn't

Qween: uhh yes it does, its your cautious telling you to keep it real with her. you been buggin since the scene last week huh??

me: yeah, a little, i guess your'e right

i notice Angel moving around, and then she tuerns on her back, then i see the picture of us on our first date, sitting on the stand beside her side of the bed

me: i gotta catch some z's i'll holla

SAME TIME WITH Jamie && Bryan
[[Jamie pov]]

the drive home was a silent one, accept when Bryan asked me if i was hungry

me:(looking out the window) no, im fine

Bryan: you sure??

me: yeah im cool

Bryan:(pulls into a taco time) you sure?? because im not gonna stop by no where else

i look at him and smile, he puts hios hand on my stomack

me:(smile) yes Bryan, in that case, can you just order me a strawberry smoothe??

Bryan: she aint hungry in there??

i look down at my 5 month pregnant stomack.

me: bryan, me and Josslyn are not by any means hungry

Bryan: ok (into speaker) can i get a number 2, a number 7, a coke, a strawberry milkshake, and a number 18??

SpeakerBox: that'll be 27.33 $, please pull up

we pull up. Bryan pays, pulls up tio the food window, then when he brings that delicious smelling food in the car, i get the munchies instantly. now i wish i wouldv'e ordered something
he hands me a bag and puts the other ones in the back

me: you cant wait until we get home to eat??

i begin to work on my milkshake. he opens the bag and pulls out my favorite, a beefy bean burrito, loaded with lettuce, tomatoes, cheese, salsa, and a hint of guacamole. OMG this is my favorite

Bryan: babe...you want this??

i knod and grab the thing out of his hands. he smiles and puts the security gates code in and then he pulls in the drive way. by the time we're in the garage, i've devoured the burrito, and im working on the milkshake again. he grabs the bags and laughs at me. i shrug it off and then smile at him

me: you know me soo well

Bryan: well i learned from the last time when you almost killed me

me:(giggle) i did not!

Bryan: yes you did, you said i was being self centered

i laugh, then i kiss his lips. he helps me in the house, and up the million stairs to our room

Bryan: Kema, get down!

our german shepard guard dog is curved out on our bed, on bryans side. she wakes up and jumps down, and then she lays on her doggy bed
he kisses me again...

EVEN LATER THAT NIGHT
Krys && Pat
[[Pat's pov]]

so after everyone left, me and Krys went to the 24 hour clinic, and it was known as Krys being 15 weeks pregnant. i was shocked as a mug, but i handled myself. Krys on the other hand was crying and she was sad the entire day. i never seen her soo sad. i thought she would be happy, because we're in love but i guess shes noit ready for a lil baby to be runnin around the house
i had to cuddle and be super gental with her. and when we got home, she cried herself to sleep. i dont know if she wants to keep the baby or not...she wont even talk to me, like i did something wrong

i lay down next to her and get comfortable. i have my back to her, after today, i just want some serious sleep. she was yelling at me everytime i spoke to her. im tired of her taking it out on me
just as im about to reply to a txt from my boo, i feel her wrap her arms around my waist, then rest her hands on my chest. i close my phone and set it down

Krys: babe...

me: yeah??

Krys: im sorry about today, i was just scared, and i wanted to be alone

me: i understand, but you act like its my fault, you been taking part in our relationship, just as much as i have

Krys: i know, and im sorry, for just yelling at you in the office

i face her and kiss her forehead. i can never stay mad at my baybee for long, shes my weakness

me: its ok, just learn to handel your emotions

Krys:(giggles) im trying...babe, do you wanna keep the baby??

i pause and look at her

me: i thought you wanted an abortion

Krys: i did at first, but then i started thinking about it, and i change my mind, so its up to you...

me: i.....

BACK TO Missi && Nelly
[[Mishaun pov]]

i cant believe this is happening. everything he told me he would never do, all happened today, i mean hes still on me, but it still went down. i dont know what ima do when he lets me loose. i feel soo vonerable and weak around him now. i just wish he would stop
........an hour later........
he rolls off of me and onto his side. i hide deep under the blankets and cry. he turns out the light then gets back in bed

Carnell: mishaun...

i dont answer, i think im staring to hate him, im scared of him, i mean he did just rape me, no dout about that, because i said no, and he forced me, thats rape right????
i dont care if he can hear me crying. it hurted and it still does.
he gets closer to me and.....


$$$$ok ya'll know what to do if you enjoyed this chapter && if not, let me know$$$$

-mishaun

 
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Jul 19, 2008 at 5:30 am 

omg i hated it!!!SIKE I LUVED THIS CHICK...OMG GIRL KEEP THIS GOIN CAUSE IM SO IN LUV WITH THIS!!!! AND AWWWW IM A GREAT PERSON TO TALK TO{{(TEAR)}}}....BUT GIRL I'LL WHOOP NELLZ FOR U IF U WANT ME TO..NO DAT!!LMAO AWWW MAH LIL J POO IS PREGGY WOWWWWWWWWW I WONDER IF IMA GET PREGGY?? CANT WAIT TIL NEXT CHAPTER..HURRY

*yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Mz. Rasberry
LADii Qween

 
Jul 19, 2008 at 4:18 am 

*New Reader*
Thiz Storii Is
Bangin 2 The Fulest!!!
Kant Wait 4 The Next Chp.

 
Jul 19, 2008 at 3:51 am 

Aww this was good mami.Ima a weakness yay.Lol but d**n bryan eat dat much.Carnell bein a lil b**th cus he couldnt get non the regular way.OH yea and we do need to be da bomb like tick tick lol.But anywayz loved it

~~Krys~~

 
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